peer Review

peer Review:

(Adapted from a Mike Michaud’s Bedford Bits blog post.) Write a brief letter in response to one student’s essay that answers the following:

“Given your understanding of the assignment, what is working about the writer’s first draft? What is good? What do you like? (Point to three specific aspects of his/her draft that are working or ‘good’).”
“Given your understanding of the assignment, what in regard to this draft needs work? (Point to three specific aspects of his/her draft that can be improved).”
Use the Essay Assignment Prompt and Directions plus the rubric for the assignment to determine your understanding of the assignment.

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     The writer has got an original topic and the topic blends well with the story. There can be seen to be a flow of thoughts in the story as the post is arranges in point form. The introduction forms the first paragraph and the writer has very well shown what he is to talk about by introducing ……………….