The story is about my husbands homecoming

The story is about my husbands homecoming

You will find attached the essay that I have already started. I just need you to finish the story…by including one or two more paragraphs about meeting my husband as he steps off the plane. (The story is about my husbands homecoming) … I’m sure you can guess how the story might end as i’ve already painted the scene in the beginning paragraphs. Please use descriptive language, and try to put yourself in my shoes as to how I might have been feeling. I also need you to fix the intro (1st para) because apparently it does not have a clear thesis statement according to my tutor. Also sort any grammatical errors that you might see. Please ensure the essay has between 550 and 800 words, and follows the above instructions.

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Narrative/Descriptive Essay – Final Draft

I will never forget the day my husband returned from his eight-month deployment to Afghanistan as a United States Marine in 2011. That period in time was the longest and most emotional eight months of my life.  Day by day, month-by-month, my long, arduous wait was coming to a close.  Eight months of built up anxiousness and curiosity…………….

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